I have written a press release and need some feedback - can anyone help?
I need an honest opinion on the press release I have written. This is to publicise a project I am working on. Can anyone help - much apreciated!
I would be happy to, I write myself and have studied English, mail me via my profile which you can access by clicking on my name
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January 8th, 2009 at 7:19 pm
I can..email me.
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January 8th, 2009 at 7:48 pm
I would be happy to, I write myself and have studied English, mail me via my profile which you can access by clicking on my name
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January 8th, 2009 at 8:27 pm
As long it is not on behalf of Falun Gong and the only copy is in Beijing… feel free to send it over
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January 8th, 2009 at 8:39 pm
Send Me It Bro. Il Sort Ya Out Salam
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January 8th, 2009 at 9:08 pm
If you're writing something public you should try keeping off religious grounds.And you should nopt forget human rights-that will attract more attention and since there is now more freedom of speech than ever,you should set your boundaries.People might give you their sympathy but some might not be sincere,so never be tempted to tell all,just point out some and highlight main issues.And keep the language simple.
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January 8th, 2009 at 9:57 pm
you can send me the press release so that I can send my feedback
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January 8th, 2009 at 10:16 pm
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